Super Fly Bolt
how do u make this script un corny lame etc?DO NOT SAY STUFF LIKE U CANT OK?
some person walk up to an old lady
person:hey you!!
old lady:me?
person:how would you like to try our newest product called :revive energy drink!!!”
cute character come off the can
cute character:hey you should try drink it once you’ll love it!!(i wanted 2 make it rhyme but idk)
old lady: okay
she drinks it
she turns around and becomes a young superhero
old lady /super hero:wow this stuff is great peace!!
old lady/super hero fly’s off
some person: wow that’s so cool
cute character:hey if u want MEGA ENERGY BUY “revive energy drink!!
shows can
narrator:please don’t use the product on the dead zombie army will eat our brains!!
http://flowercast.net/wp-content/uploads…
cute character:Buy it now!!!call:125 6784 5555(fake number)
what do u think ummm what should i name the cute character?what she he /she be a electric bolt?should i change anything?? ( i know its corny but its just 4 a crumy school project)
What is your intention with this particular story?? IF you are aiming to make a spoof – which seems like it to me – then I would be tempted to have her not become a younger superhero via clothing, but just suddenly become incredibly sprightly, bouncy, etc and perhaps use her cane to beat off the cute character – as it protests to no effect. ‘Dang, Critter! Scoot! Outa my way…etc. CC going: ouch, hey, that hurt, etc. It’s quite funny to see the tables turned sometimes.
That’d show it’s not too serious, but still with a serious message.
Review: NIKE VAPOR VII SUPERFLY III english/german 2011 | C.Ronaldo boots | by f247
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